Ethical Differences and Personal Preferences
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Ethical Differences and Personal Experience Essay [This title could be more inspiring. Labeling it a "paper" or an "essay" is redundant (what else could it be?), and only a few words as a title are not very explanatory (or intriguing to the reader). An ideal title has between six and a dozen words ]
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August 22, 2013
Bob Philip
Ethical Differences and Personal Experience Essay
Each individual person has their [Check pronoun agreement--if "their" refers to "Each individual" (or a singular subject), it should be singular, too (his or her)] own meaning of ethics derivative to his or her values
Ethical Differences and Personal Experience Essay [This title could be more inspiring. Labeling it a "paper" or an "essay" is redundant (what else could it be?), and only a few words as a title are not very explanatory (or intriguing to the reader). An ideal title has between six and a dozen words ]
ETH [Check spelling] 316
August 22, 2013
Bob Philip
Ethical Differences and Personal Experience Essay
Each individual person has their [Check pronoun agreement--if "their" refers to "Each individual" (or a singular subject), it should be singular, too (his or her)] own meaning of ethics derivative to his or her values
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