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Agree or disagree: In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at the young age.
* … is trapped in a similar dilemma as to whether or not to… Heading
In contemporary society, parents all over the world are trapped in a similar dilemma as to whether or not to make their children learn how to manage money at the young age. Some people maintain that such early start in the education of money management and becoming financially responsible adults are closely related. To large extent, however, I am on the opposite side of this claim and reckon that it is out of focus.
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思路框架：
1. 让步 To begin with, I have to concede that knowing how to use money effectively when one is little, at certain degree, is beneficial.
2．因素分析 Nevertheless, the claim of emphasizing the role that learning money management at young age plays in cultivating a sense of responsibility in adult is contraindicated with several intrinsic irrationalities.
3. 演绎推理 At last, the consequences that this proposal is expected to bring about would turn out to be destructive. 1. 让步 To begin with, I have to concede that knowing how to use money effectively when one is little, at certain degree, is beneficial. On one respect, the early start in the accumulation of knowledge and skills, in certain cases, is effective in laying a solid foundation. On the other, this measure somewhat minimizes the risk of financial problems in future life.
Tip:
Little vs small vs tiny
2．言论谬误
Nevertheless, the claim of emphasizing the role that learning money management at young age plays in making a financially responsible adult is contaminated with several intrinsic irrationalities. As is often the case, implanting a sense of financial responsibility into an individual is acknowledged as a complicated task whose solution involves a combination of efforts on both the internal and external respects
* … is trapped in a similar dilemma as to whether or not to… Heading
In contemporary society, parents all over the world are trapped in a similar dilemma as to whether or not to make their children learn how to manage money at the young age. Some people maintain that such early start in the education of money management and becoming financially responsible adults are closely related. To large extent, however, I am on the opposite side of this claim and reckon that it is out of focus.
Body
思路框架：
1. 让步 To begin with, I have to concede that knowing how to use money effectively when one is little, at certain degree, is beneficial.
2．因素分析 Nevertheless, the claim of emphasizing the role that learning money management at young age plays in cultivating a sense of responsibility in adult is contraindicated with several intrinsic irrationalities.
3. 演绎推理 At last, the consequences that this proposal is expected to bring about would turn out to be destructive. 1. 让步 To begin with, I have to concede that knowing how to use money effectively when one is little, at certain degree, is beneficial. On one respect, the early start in the accumulation of knowledge and skills, in certain cases, is effective in laying a solid foundation. On the other, this measure somewhat minimizes the risk of financial problems in future life.
Tip:
Little vs small vs tiny
2．言论谬误
Nevertheless, the claim of emphasizing the role that learning money management at young age plays in making a financially responsible adult is contaminated with several intrinsic irrationalities. As is often the case, implanting a sense of financial responsibility into an individual is acknowledged as a complicated task whose solution involves a combination of efforts on both the internal and external respects